How Life in the Slums Affect Human Populations.

People tend to pass through dump sites and wonder, "Geez, how can someone stand that smell?" Well, believe it or not but some people have to live with that smell all their lives. Most of these people live in slums. A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by poor housing, lack of security, and over crowding. The existence of slums affects human populations because slums easily spread diseases, attract people due to inexpensive costs, and over crowd small areas. Furthermore, slums easily spread diseases.
Because of an unhealthy environment, diseases are able to spread easily. Sheri Fink states, "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children." (Fink 2) With no other water source, the people who drink this poor contaminated excuse for water. As an affect, their chances of getting diseases increase. This easily affects human population by increasing the death rate. But many people tend to ignore this and choose to live here for the cheap costs.
The idea of something being cheap makes life easier for the people with low wages to survive. Armstrong O'Brian Ongera states,"'With less than a dollar you can survive'"(Fink 3). A dollar is a very cheap cost. You don't need a lot of money to live in a slum. Compared to other places, a dollar is greatly cheap! This affects the human population by increasing it. Because of cheap costs, many people decide to live in the slums therefore overcrowding small areas.
Many people living in a small area results to overcrowding. According to Sheri Fink,"She lives here with her four children, her husband, and her in-laws. All eight of them are crowded into a one room shack."(Fink 3) Many people living in the slums have to share a room shack with more than one person. Over crowding affect the human populations by causing uncomfortness and the invasion of one's privacy.
By 2030, an estimated 5 billion of the world's 8.1 billion people will live in cities. About 2 billion of them will live in slums, primarily in Africa and Asia, lacking access to clean drinking water and working toilets, surrounded by desperation and crime. These estimates will affect human populations by easily spreading diseases, attracting people due to inexpensive costs, and over crowd small areas. The environment of the slums causes the human populations to both rise and drop. When looking at how life is in a slum it makes people appreciate in what they have and make them want to volunteer to help out people living in the slums.

Rough Draft.

How Life in the Slums Affect Human Populations

Ever passed through a dumpsite and wondered, "Geez, how can someone stand that smell?" Well, believe it or not but some people have to live with that smell all their lives. Most of these people live in slums. A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by poor housing, lack of security, and over crowding. The existence of slums affects human populations because slums easily spread diseases, attract people due to inexpensive costs, and over crowd small areas. Furthermore, slums easily spread diseases.

 Because of an unhealthy environment, diseases are able to spread easily. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children." With no other water source, the people who drink this poor contaminated excuse for water. As an affect, their chances of getting diseases increase. This easily affects human population by increasing the death rate. But many people tend to ignore this and choose to live here for the cheap costs.

 The idea of something being cheap makes life easier for the people with low wages to survive. "'With less than a dollar you can survive'" A dollar is a very cheap cost. You don't need a lot of money to live in a slum. Compared to other places, a dollar is greatly cheap! This affects the human population by increasing it. Because of cheap costs, many people decide to live in the slums therefore overcrowding small areas.

 Many people living in a small area results to overcrowding. "She lives here with her four children, her husband, and her in-laws. All eight of them are crowded into a one room shack." Many people living in the slums have to share a room shack with more than one person. Over crowding affect the human populations by causing uncomfortness and the invasion of one's privacy.

 By 2030, an estimated 5 billion of the world's 8.1 billion people will live in cities. About 2 billion of them will live in slums, primarily in Africa and Asia, lacking access to clean drinking water and working toilets, surrounded by desperation and crime. These estimates will affect human populations by easily spreading diseases, attracting people due to inexpensive costs, and over crowd small areas. The environment of the slums causes the human populations to both rise and drop. When looking at how life is in a slum it makes people appreciate in what they have and make them want to volunteer to help out people living in the slums.

Introduction Paragraph.

 Ever passed through a dumbpsite and wondered, "Geez, how can someone stand that smell?" Well, believe it or not but some people have to live with that smell all their lives. Most of these people live in slums. A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by poor housing, lack of security, and over crowding. The existence of slums affect human populations because slums easily spread diseases, attract people due to inexpewnsive costs, and over crowd small areas. Furthermore, slums easily spread diseases.

Outline.

I. Introduction
a. Hook
Ever passed through a dumbpsite and wondered, "Geez, how can someone stand that smell?" Well, believe it or not but some people have to live with that smell all their lives. Most of these people live in slums.

b. Slum Introduction
A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by poor housing, lack of security, and over crowding.

c. Thesis Statement
The existence of slums affects human populations because slums spread easily caught diseases, attract people due to inexpensive costs, and over crowd small areas.

d. Transition
Furthermore, slums easily spread diseases.

II. Defendable Point # 1
a. Main Idea
Because of an unhealthy enviorment, diseases are able to spread easily.
b. Supporting Evidence
i. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children."
ii. With unsafe water to drink, diseases are easy to spread.
c. Explanation
When many people get sick, there is a higher chance of death. Easily spread diseases affect the death rate.
d. Transition
But people ignore this and live here for the cheap costs.
III. Defendable Point # 2
a. Main Idea
They idea of something being cheap make life easier for people with low wages to survive.
b. Supporting Evidence
i. " 'With less than a dollar you can survive.' "
ii. You don't need a lot of money to live in a slum.
c. Explanation
People who deal with poverty are attracted to cheap costs because it makes life easier for them. This affects the human populations by increasing the human populations.
d. Transition
Because of cheap costs, many people decide to live in the slums therefore overcrowding the area.
IV. Defendable Point # 3
a. Main Idea
Because of many people living in a small area over crowding occurs. 
b. Supporting Evidence
i. "She lives here with her four children, her husband and her in-laws. All eight of them are crowded into a one room shack."
ii. She has to live with many people in a small area.
c. Explanation
Over crowding affect the human populations by causing comfortableness.
d. Transition
Over crowding 
V. Conclusion
a. Hook
In 2030 two billion of the world's estimated five billion will live in slums.
b. Restated Thesis
The slums are affecting human populations by  easily spreading diseases, attracting people with cheap costs, and 
c. Summary
The enviorment of the slums cause the human populations to both rise and drop.
d. Think About
When looking at how life is in a slum it makes people appreciate what they have.

Thesis Statement.

THESIS

 Ever passed through a dumbpsite and wondered, "Geez, how can someone stand that smell?" Well, believe it or not but some people have to live with that smell all their lives. Most of these people live in slums. A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by poor housing, lack of security, and over crowding. A slum brings many challenges to everyday life therefore having negative affects on human populations through easily spread diseases, unhealthy sanitation, and over crowding.